Black Poetry : Come On Baby Float With Me

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come on baby
    Won’t you flow with me?

    Rock the boat so gently
    Feel the breeze
    As we ease
    over the Sea

    Come on baby

    Connect with me
    Let’s get it on
    Mentality
    rowing rowing

    Oh so pleasingly

    Feeling the Tropical warmth
    That comes from the blazing Sun

    Floating from
    left to right

    Splashing wave
    In pure ecstasy
    Romance Spilling
    Intensely
    as we float
    Excitement. Rapture
    rowing rowing

    Seeing the Sunset
    A Natural candle light
    In the sky
    Pleasing to the eyes
    Just before the night

    I like that left and right
    Liking that rocking
    All through the night
    You and me
    two becoming one
    flowing on the sea
    It is just you and me
    The sun is set

    We only have the stars
    That shine bright
    Up above
    As we pause
    Catching our breath
    Feeling that sweet caress
    As we
    come to a rest
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now we rest
    time to caress
    as i flow wit u
    rockin
    wavin
    tenderly
    in and out
    slidin
    side 2 side
    on the mass
    of bliss

    bringin it
    sweetly
    fill wit
    compassionly
    crossin
    da galaxy of
    ecstasy
    eroticly
    u and me
    enterwined
    flowin
    in da winds
    into the dip
    of love

    as we make waves
    bodies crave
    mentally
    singing da song
    of ahhhh !!
    tonight alone
    as we roam
    the rapture of
    two
    feelin da
    explosion
    as we bust
    into ya eyez
    all i see
    and a Queen
    so unique
    dancin
    under da starz
    meserize
    in da arms
    holdin
    rollin
    u and i
    come baby

    i wanna do it yo way
    strokin in da name of
    love
     
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    Row, row, row your boat
    Gently as we float

    Merrily, merrily,
    Merrily, merrily...

    Know that One,
    Can hope!
     
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    nice flow
    very nice
    Angel
     
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    the visual images were outstanding
    very lovely...
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smiling..thank you family for the love
    Rich..always loving how you do that thang ...when you flow amor of romance:heart:

    1poetsought..you know i am smiling cause you alway make me smile...cause i like how you say ..what you got to say:heart:

    angel ..thank you sis..i am glad you like this drop :heart:

    Khasm..feeling that mellow..very nice..indeed...you do have away of bringing me to ease:heart:

    Thank you family for the love:heart:
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    floating on your flow....
     
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    indeed u always fine ways to bring it out
    thank u for the beautiful scribe to dip in
     
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    Chile I am so loving this flow...ummmmmmmm!

    See this smile upon my face...
    You put it there with your poetic grace.
    The flow and the sea sounds like my baby and me...
    Thank you for this ...
    LOVE POETICALLY!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :flirt:
     
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    Romatic Spilling!!!!!!
    It became Blue Water!
    Good LawD, I won't say anymore!
     
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