Black Poetry : Come, Let's Watch the Sunset

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Step into an oasis with me
    strolling beyond a mind of poetry
    Pink and salmon sands
    warm and gritty beneath feet
    spreading out a blanket
    for our two hearts to meet
    Come, let's watch the sunset
    my love, fiery yellow fading into
    burnt orange drifting down, resting
    waiting for another day to renew
    Notice the horizon, the backdrop for this
    illuminating orb, watch how it changes hues
    pastel...royal...navy...
    to mysterious midnight blues...
    Reflecting into the ocean, this golden
    image constantly cascading with the crest
    of each wave. Our thoughts slowly melt into
    this mesmerizing scene that God has blessed
    As the sun finally closes its eyes,
    the moon and the stars replace its guise
    let us not forget
    the allure of this beautiful sunset
    Step into this oasis with me
    strolling beyond a mind of poetry...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    taken me into the depth of this sweet sunset & oasis
    very beautiful view keep painting the picture so perfect
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for taking a step into this vision Rich, appreciated brotha.
     
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    WHOA!!!!!!!

    watz, I can't believe the beauty of this piece. I adore it.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting me know of the beauty seen in this piece gempis, appreciated.
     
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