Black Poetry : Come, Lay Your Head On My Pillow

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  1. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (Excerpts from the full peace, published in Wordsmith Underground Anthology 2001)

    Reciprocal Love, in fullest bloom
    The two of us, with missions in tune
    Come closer, don't be timid
    Drop the inhibitions, and let's get vivid

    Two nude canvases...neon paint
    Imaginations...with no restraint
    Black light illuminance
    Creative exhuberance

    Artistic interaction
    4play satisfaction
    Come...
    Lay Your Head On My Pillow

    Whispers of devotion
    Overflow of emotion
    Untainted potion
    Watermelon lotion

    Champagne toasting
    Fantasies coaxing
    Fingers intertwined
    as passion unwinds

    Back rubbing...
    Keigel tugging...
    Each successive stroke
    More loving

    He supine...she on top
    Tongue tips taste test fiery spots
    Come...
    Lay Your Head On My Pillow
     
  2. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nia Maishani..... Girl that was wonderfully vivid.....
    Defintely a pleasure 2 read!!!
    Passionate scribe girl....
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read!
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was verry verry nice


    uh where can i buy those pilows?

    just beautifull sista nia
     
  5. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, thank you, thank you...

    Diimond, WindWalker and libertylaida

    and welcome, libertylaida. I appreciate y'all.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so sweet and beautiful
    let me be the first to lay on yo pillow of comfort
     
  7. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nia.


    well...jess dayum!! this sho did wake me up
    this monin', chile!! i loved the imagery & the
    delicious words you used. thank ya!! :D

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
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    I accept your invitation......I would be honored to lay my head on your pilllow.
     
  9. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, elayne, Bishop...

    I sho' appreciate the :love:, Scribes. Didn't mean to overlook your question, libertylaida. Any large, nicely stuffed one will do, Love; helps if it has pull-out feathers if ya catch my drift. But the pillow itself should soon become irrelevant anyway. :grin:
     
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    Passion wrapped in candy and silk...

    inspiring!

    ~Shani:)
     
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