Black Poetry : COME INTO MY WORLD

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, Jun 22, 2004.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come into my life,
    and make me whole.
    make me feel like,
    life is worth living.
    take whatever doesn't belong,
    and make use of it.
    because as of this moment,
    i'm living a lie.
    a lie that's told the same way,
    over and over again.
    and i'd like for you to fill my life,
    with the passion it needs-to keep on living.
    enter into my world,
    of despair and grief.
    turn it into our world,
    the world or rememberance.
    the world where i know tomorrow,
    will be worth living..............
     
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    yes this is a very nice flow
    sounds like a wonderful
    place i would like to be
    flow on
    wonderful indeed
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'preciate the love Bluewater, you always know what to say
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this speaks to me
    and the best place to be
    and hold dear love the flow
     
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    Asking a heart to join to make one whole, I liked this flow.
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for the replies, it means a lot to me, when someone replies, so don't think i don't notice them............cuz i do........ :heart:
     
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    heart touching scribe...
    love the sentiment...
    keep flowing poet...
     
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    Nice flow...
    However it's you, that should step into your world and make it worth living...then ask him to join you in your world, oh what a union that would be :love:
    I like the way you laid that out, thanks for pulling us in.
     
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