Black Poetry : Come into my love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by A007, Oct 12, 2002.

  1. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come into my love
    Your love that was longing
    to be with someone equally lonely
    your love that longed to be
    made of trust and honesty

    Come into my love
    the love that holds you close
    in pledges of passion sustained
    the love that will shelter you
    the best it can from all the worlds
    heartache and pain

    Come into my love
    that love which is perfect in harmony
    in deed and in mission
    that love which has no limits
    no bounderies no conditions

    Come into my love
    this love that will make us one
    in soul able to create new life
    this love unafraid of the commitment
    that wants you as my wife

    Come into my love
    my love that i'm willing to share
    with you until the end of time
    my love that loves you with
    heart--soul--and mind

    Come into my love
    Your love
    The love
    That love
    This

    For if you

    Come into my love
    My love will
    promise you
    nothing but
    Happiness
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVE...a many splendid thing

    take her within the protection of your embrace...and let her taste what it's like to know happiness and peace...sheltered from the raging storm that is LIFE'S WOES.

    beautifully scripted...007.

    THANKS for sharing.
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    O Snap!

    A007 has songwriting skills likw what :)

    keep writing now

    :)

    pd
     
  4. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller and Poetic thank you for reading and responding to my writing. It is both flattering and encouraging that you do so especially coming from gifted poets such as yourselves. Thanks agoin.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man now dis was tyght
    inside ya heart u pose da love she so need
    in comfort u did it wit dis one .....flow on A007
     
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    She will defintely come into ur love....A007 that was sooo beautiful friend...
    oooooo weeeeeee ya heard me!!!!
    As always I enjoyed ur flow....
    Wondeful!!!!!
     
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    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich and Diimond......i'm glad yall liked it. Thanx
     
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    awww this is a speechles piece...


    i know any woman who commes to youre love
    will know what it feels like to be loved.....
     
  9. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetically beautifully scribed.
    If a man asked of me that, i would yell at the top of my lungs, "i do I do!"
    So very nice.
    *Emma*
     
  10. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. This piece flowed with passion and sincerity. Very nicely done.
     
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