Black Poetry : Come Inside

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cherryblossom, May 4, 2009.

  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Come right on in......

    I have reserved a special place for you
    Right up front, so you'll better enjoy the view
    That I've prepared for my grand debut
    Made up of love and trust and hope
    And all the pains that we've, each, been through
    As from my pen to your mind and heart,
    I want to infuse and imbue
    Every emotional, mental, psychological and spiritual view
    That we share AND those we won't
    But I'll still want you here even though I don't
    Understand or accept your p.o.v.
    *But, isn't that the essence of poetry?*

    So, please, come right in
    And allow me to dissect my pen
    Because I want you right up inside
    For when I hurt, for me, my tears, it cried
    And the secrets I could tell no one else,
    In it I confide
    Upon the tear-stained page, torn decisions,
    It helps me choose and decide
    And when faith in myself has lagged,
    It renews my pride
    So, do come inside
    For, at times, my strength has waned and died
    But I know where I lack,
    Through your pen, YOU'LL provide

    So, please, come inside.... ​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully laid and message well recieved as i step inside closer for a sweeter view
    and an intent ear .......I really love this peace and da depth of it what it bring to my
    mental...
     
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