Black Poetry : .::COME INSIDE WITH ME::.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, May 12, 2005.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watch my lines ,dont copy me,look into thy eyes,the irony
    of going back in time to say "ima do whuts right for me'
    im like a 'x',staring down on y and z ,i might just be
    ya lifes end or ya lifes beginin,COME INSIDE WITH ME


    im a rhyme odyssey
    rhyme properly....
    till i die with all eyes watchin me
    im a shine bright cause time aint stoppin me.....
    define my minds monopoly
    of organized crime and lies ,possibly....
    might define why i committed so many robberies
    with blind eyes cause i alwayz lacked sight,optically.....
    i'm,
    gainin my vision
    went on some tainted missions
    was aimin viscous.....
    grazed some kids with
    many .38 shells that they've been hit wit.....
    now i record my life musically
    some may call it rap
    but whut i call it is the gift that god gave me
    in fact
    it is the truth for me .....
    usually the pain soaks and i wondah whut would it do for me..?
    but i been numb since day one
    since my uncle died and i envisioned him shootin hoops with me...
    played a whole game thinkin he was there
    I hit five jumpers.....
    back then my b ball game was on point
    we were some jive suckas..!...
    i havent played basketball since,
    my inncocense been F#ucked....
    started pullin sticks ~n~ such
    i was Mista 'Stick em Up".....
    a sinners luck,may have it
    some,may grab it,...
    or some ,
    may act with the actions of backstabbas....
    i laughed at em try to take a peice my talents
    couldnt sign on the dotted line back then
    funny how now thats whut im after....
    was true to the music,
    stupid for usin' Krulz(my aka) wit
    i gained Lurk,
    and Lurk wants tha real back
    so im a forget movin units.....................

    watch my lines ,dont copy me,look into thy eyes,the irony
    of going back in time to say "ima do whuts right for me'
    im like a 'x',staring down on y and z ,i might just be
    ya lifes end or ya lifes beginin,COME INSIDE WITH ME
     
  2. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's fire
    I like...
    ....A lot.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    work it out this was tight enjoyed
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa!!
    this was phat and hot !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You use your words to take the reader right inside of that mental. Keep on flowing as you do poet of the week.
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lurk.. so when you gunna hold me up? Momma told me never to fight a man with a big gun in his pocket.. lol.. :bellydance: just to drop everything and obey. Nice scribe.. it was hot.
     
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    Sounds like the story of my life, overstanding that it's yours.

    I look back in regret at things I've done...
    Feelin' blessed & relieved that I didn't get killed by someone...
    Cuz although I was intelligent in school, I was dumb...
    Puttin' on my stick-up gear as soon as the night comes...
    Waitin' patiently & scopin' the scene 4 just the right one...
    Catch 'em when they least expected it, rob them blind & run.

    Then my daughter came.

    Feelin' this piece completely.

    Keep puttin' it down, bruh.
     
  8. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YES YES YES p MINDSET..U KNOW IT MAN....

    THE JOY OF BEING A FATHER COULD MAKE A MAN CHANGE HIS WAYZ

    GOD WORKS LIKE THAT...AND IM BLESSED.....

    PRECIATE YOU TAKIN YOUR TIME OUT TO LEAVE FEED ON THIS...

    UNO
     
  9. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    up for those who like
     
  10. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :insane:

    just needed to print this real quick ,last time up
     
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