Black Poetry : Come Ill

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Jan 9, 2003.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    COME ILL

    Getting lame enough to redden brains with flames play
    Dragon games and like wagon train run cats over every day
    Got a gun in my Rover don’t play care less what your folder say
    This legit vapor is funny like counterfeit paper money
    A taker of honey from the bees like bears tough like a gunny
    Adjust your fuss to a certain measure, hurting the pleasure of rap
    Flirting treasure when a girl sit in my lap the coochee get trap
    Alter and adapt just to slaughter whack crap Falter with the dap
    My fist hurt, just diss a jerk and piss in the dirt and yap
    Like a sound wave hound brave ears with vibration years
    Of citations from the cops this hood locating bring fears
    Stand and rip versions of manuscript even make a surgeon trip
    Made a virgin take off her slip, while emerging with her lips
    Girl love your eyes let me rub your thighs oh MADD a thug
    Really tries to get it, you excite my passion in tight fashion with a hug
    Don’t have on a gown please don’t squeeze just tone down //
    Magnificent blocks got different stocks of females
    In the hood stuff is legal but there’s good and evil without fail
    Killing beef now need a filling in my teeth in order to prevail
    Home is a cheerful place
    But a microphone is fearful for your taste

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u bustin loose dis year!
    nice vibe
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL YO HARDLY ANYONE ELSE PEEPED BUT ITS ALL GOOD DOE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man da house sleep in ya vision but i see hear ya
    and most of all learn from ya .......Thank u MADD.
     
  5. Blkthunder

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    Like how you mix images "Like a sound wave hound brave ears with vibration years "
     
  6. msluciousb

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    Dude you got MADD skillz!

    Even an old broad like me can appreciate the poetry in your unique flow...always full of twist and turns makes my Spidey senses tingle and always something to learn....thanks for letting us visit your world! Diggin you to the utmost you are a very talented Scribe...and those who didn't read, well they might not be ready for the Rapper...you may tend to intimidate with your abstract way with play on words...It's like chess, your poems are for the mental/absorption rate 100% those who can't understand ought to ask ! None the less continue with your task as I continue to relish the growth that has come to pass!

    Blessings On ya house !:peace: :peace: :peace: :peace:
     
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    $RICH$$, Blkthunder AND msluciousb THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL YO STAIT DROPPING RIGH TNOW