Quiet Poetry Lounge : come home....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Oct 15, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come home....
    Didn’t you hear me ask you to stay
    In the middle of you walkin out…
    I never had another but your touch…
    You were my first…
    And you turn to be my last…
    My first love….

    Come home
    Come home….
    My love is callin..
    Come home….

    My heart is hurting…
    Cant you hear me ask you to stay…
    Don’t walk out the door…
    My heart is callin
    Cant you hear me…
    You were my first
    And you to to be my last
    My first love…
    My only love….

    Come home
    Come home….
    My love is callin..
    Come home….

    I sit in da middle of the room
    Cornered…in…my heart
    is ache of dis pain..
    didn’t you hear me
    ask you to stay…..
    you walk out as if you didn’t…
    care...

    Come home
    Come home….
    My love is callin..
    Come home….

    a
    .. taste
    ....of me
    ........blackangel
    ..........you
    .............see
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    didn't u hear me
    somtime da first is da worse
    didn't u feel me
    sometime it's best
    so da heart can rest
    didn't u hear me !
    sometime da call not worthy
    so u pass and
    hear da call of a new love

    dis was mad tyte scribe here had me going as u can see....
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes lol i see..
    it may be the worst but for
    the moment it was the best..
    all gravey coz
    i moved on before he...
    but should stayed...
    but he walk
    now i am all good....
    what a merry go around...
    but now i am down
    with a new bo..
    thanks for the read
    think i got a flow...
    woooweee
     
  4. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very tyte flow indeed...


    keep me comin' home for more.
     
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    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    then it was a str8 poem..
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is great, girl.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...gempis fo da read
     
  10. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was sweet, deep and to the point ...I liked it
     
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