Black Poetry : Come Hard

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Sep 13, 2003.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come Hard

    Need a longer vacation with stronger devastation hunger and starvation
    Not good health need hood wealth to survive a drought scar a nation
    Ill like diphtheria rips and kills bacteria I stay on route to your location
    Walk and slaughter ish then swim like saltwater fish a wet creation
    Yall pass the scuba gear got my computer here click on the mousse
    Quick from my house and deep-sea dive spree is live boots blouse
    Lick scum in the fog like the tongue of a dog so yall pass the collar
    To this last scholar let me bark, blast and holler but never trash a dollar
    Got a deft style like a reptile alligator or crocodile on the block wild
    Like FIFTY CENTS, look blind stress causes rhyme deaths so smile
    Spit proper scroll like Doctor Scholl’s I’m jelling reputation swelling
    Like snake bites, creates dynamite explosives corrosive and smelling
    Like idle hours my title towers like overtime on a punch clock
    Lunch hot like a Hungry Man’s meal ham hocks I munch on the block
    Have a bazaar sketch that’s far fetch like nature it rain
    In your brain like a hurricane like a sink your mainframe drain
    These literary characteristics even make a secretary ballistic
    Make her a hype fighter pushing a typewriter so sadistic
    Jot down notes, drop nouns and quotes like a Grammar teacher
    Use verbs and words to express my best glamour feature
    Unlike low self esteem flow deft and mean like a stream
    Brothers my comprehension is in another dimension it seem
    Is it a dream? Like the pros and cons my flow beyond recognition
    Like blonde ambition even Marilyn Monroe know this edition

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a tyte piece...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 smokin scribe
    tyte flow bruh ! MADD
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was str
    love it
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so tight...and i heard music and could see someone at a mic while i was reading this. much respect for this
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling your curve
    on this ..taking
    to another level
    feeling a mssion
    nice vibes...
    Peace
     
  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all whom peeped and special thanks for the responses for real
     
  8. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD respect for this lovin it...flow on brutha
     
  9. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BaduX THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL YO APPRECIATE THAT HOMEY
     
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