Black Poetry : Come for me.. sweet honey

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 20, 2008.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come with me and discover


    What forms within the mind?

    Be ready to stay up all night
    Have fun with me. All day
    Happens seamlessly

    Here is what we do.

    You pick me up. We dine for sure
    Then visit a friend that owns
    a night club patio in town
    Dance the night
    live music

    spend the evening with "your kind of crowd"
    slow dancing romancing
    cocktails under the stars
    getting to know me now

    The bands are best
    Friday / Saturday nights

    In the loft
    You dancing with me all night

    That ends that part of a beginning

    Across town now
    About an hour from here

    There is a casino
    That calls my name

    It has prizes
    Of chance
    So does life or romance

    We all gamble daily and not really know
    With affairs of the heart

    I will gamble on love
    With you anytime

    The moment reveals
    This things for sure

    With you my
    Luck is grand

    I am gambling at my best
    They serve only coffee
    You desire a coke
    I have had so many

    So I am wired
    For going all day

    I turn to you
    Hand you the money that you
    And I won in the casino that night

    Internal clock goes off
    Ready for the best part
    Of the Adventure we are on

    To discover

    To get

    To know

    I pull you outside
    To catch the morning sun
    Then tell what you want to know

    Kiss you on the cheek
    You want some breakfast hon

    If they serving crab we
    Have some of that eggs and champagne
    The bubbles you say
    Tickle your nose

    You drive me back
    To where you picked me up

    It’s evening time
    The next day

    You look at me
    It’s in your eye
    This man you want to freak

    So it goes as planned

    I take your hand

    Down take you
    The way you like

    The night isn’t over

    We can’t quit until first light.
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling ya Hodee playa

    i can't be mad at the mac'n

    :nono:
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Soja
    For real!

    You I profess
    I'm a gambler
    When that girl showed me how she can keep up
    I knew I found a female stallion.

    I'm running hard
    Having fun of course
    Always finding time for the loving!

    Soja..thanks bro
     
  4. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea! I really enjoyed this....

    the beautiful thing was how I was imagining the scene as I was reading....so colorful....


    one prob tho....me picking you up.....
    :bam:

    sorry sweetie, i dont pick up dudes, LOL!!!!! (unless I love em)


    much enjoyed Hodee, and great pic of you!
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is this liberating experience of picking up your date
    beside I didn't have money left. i gave it all to you.:spank: :sand:Can I get a cab?
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

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    Hi Hodee...

    I enjoyed the entire journey to discovery, but I envisioned this line,
    Soul-beautifully!



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Hodee,

    So romantically sweet this little treat
    you've blessed us with...keep the flow going. :terrific:


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    awesome ...look like one fullnight of sweet fundancing in romance
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Live Well, Laugh Often, Love Much
    Live Well, Laugh Often, Love Hard


    Thank You cocobutterskyn

    I love your Signature.
     
  10. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet apple*pie
    Thank you

    Poetry
    Should spark the imagination
    Bring some things into realization
    Bring to issue the things at hand

    I am please to know. Thank You .. my flow was with you
     
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