Black Poetry : Come Deep

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come Deep

    Tangle with the worse then angle verse at domes
    Then rehearse for the unknown like curse turn bread to stone
    This affair remain high like an airplane in the sky like a flame
    Fry eggs, make the lame jump off a ledge put funk in your brains
    And hedge so grab the weed whacker, as my creed becomes the attacker
    Like Jack the Ripper, large in fact like the big dipper a star tracker //
    Don’t confuse the news or have a collision with the television
    Like Barbara Walters even make the larger falters on mission
    Stuff alters decision like propaganda call the papa roxy
    Never express a lie in my bandana
    Clever in this mess like Princess Dianna
    Like an envelope wrap up dope quote and prevail to mail
    You script without failure this clout is paraphernalia so hail
    To the king but this conviction jail thing you’ll need bail
    On runway it’s a fun day the heat strange in verbal sprees
    Range from 0 to 100 degrees from trees fall herbal and leaves
    Scatter debris while these cats flatter me need passion and fees
    Voice sound exact like a horse been around the track a few
    Times got new rhymes that confines microphones and slew
    Minds and domes and roams in the jungle like Tarzan and apes
    Sweet on computers, discrete maneuvers crumble a caravan of fakes

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece was inspired by you.... madd flowz like alwayz keep doing tha dayum thang!

    .....
    Let this flow
    penetrate your soul
    fully explode into rhymes and verses and chorus
    for us
    to know
    this rhyme got me going on the real
    when no one be knowing
    put up the red flag
    cuz i been through enough
    and even when the rode gets tough
    gotz to hold my head up high
    son, ain't telling no lies
    no alibis
    my refuge and strength
    although at times feeling lonely in rage
    looking out to be free
    digging deeper
    till i started to sing
    till i started to bleed
    and eliminate the poison in my soul
    that venom that kept mind in control
    this story's been told
    still repeatively gets old
    loose joint
    this flow
    like loose movements
    keepin you sane
    for the love of the heat
    the determination
    the purpose destiny has called to designate a time and place
    the calm and cool
    the cruel intentions
    from the start
    the playing games with ya heart
    the time that has been lost
    the tears wasted on someone else
    the longing to go home
    whereva that iz
    and the yearning to dissipate this fear
    with the cure of love
    with the cure of friendship,happiness,and bonding unconditional
    through the years
    the deep speaks to deep
    the catch you when you fall
    the i got your back
    when the world seems too cold
    the near when friends seem so distant and so few
    the comfort when all hell breaks loose
    the sweetness in a bitter after taste
    the joy in conflict
    and lieing to ya face
    the lullaby in the terror of the night
    the angel standing there to protect you
    while demons try to fight
    the spiritual
    unseen lyrical
    battel field
    the war underground
    good against evil
    going pound for pound
    i've got my camaflouge
    with my gun in my hand
    ready to devour the terrorist
    that stole my land
    ....
    ready to devour the terrorist
    that raped the innocent
    .....
    ready to devour the terrorist
    it's a T.K.O.
    going blow fa blow
    Till there is no more
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm THANKS FO RRESPONDING AND THAT POEM WAS OFF THE HOOK GIRL FOR REAL YO
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow poet
     
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