Black Poetry : Come back to me!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lloyd, Aug 13, 2004.

  1. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How to say it?How to make u understand it?
    Should i write it?Should i sing it?
    I don't know
    Don't u remember the time we've spend together?
    More than buddies,more than friends
    Just like brothers till the end
    I don't understand,I don't believe
    That itz u the one making me endure all this pain
    I thought what was going between us was for real
    In my head it was like i was important for u
    U were my adviser,my shelter
    Now i'm lost
    Ur ears r not good enough to hear my heart shouting
    Ur eyes r not good enough to see me cryin'
    Have write u so many times
    Just to ask for forgiveness if i've done something wrong
    What are u now!
    I don't recognize anymore the girl who forced my admiration
    Come back to me please
    I'm cold without u


    Dedicated to a girl here!
    Plz come back n let us be friends again
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hope she hear you
    you put alot of emotions in this
    nicley posed
    good luck
    Angel
     
  3. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww, that is sweet. hopefully all is forgiven. best wishes!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis here express it all one shall hear indeed tyte flow
     
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    This is so sweet!!!!
    This is sure to melt
    her heart!!!!!!

    Keep right on releasing them!!!!
    Very sweet drop!!!1