Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Mar 23, 2002.
© SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
come as i am !
forth i am who i am
under the silver line
of sweet love
i face my days of
i seek out ya everlasting
yet i know not of ya
true love u vow
forth i am coming
unto ya arms
of pure love
letting ya rays of
shyne brighten my way
in ya arm i may lay
upon da chest
and with me i bring
comfort u yet to feel
da spirit of love
u lone to touch
bliss of desires
i'm coming !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FLYGHT NIGHT of ROMANCE >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Nice piece Sunshyne, love ya work.
you already know how i feel so i'm not gonna go on and on about it. (lol)
great poem like always
cant wait for more
Very poignant flow my dear!!!
lol at shery...jus too much. lol...otay, otay, otay. i'm over it. now, sweet sunshyne, you know i'm lovin' this one, too. keep on scribin', as i continue to watch, dear friend.
i feel so much love in this piece
this is the ultimate invitation
that only a fool could turn down
leaving the open heart hear
in an attempt to get what you want
GA_ thanks for the
sunshyne this morning
Soja. ahhhh! someone gets it! i'm glad you
enjoyed the piece. the ultimate invite, huh? thanks
for sayin' dat sweetie!!
KL. you are the silliest!! i appreciate you
takin' the time to come ova & show some luv!!
BigHead. hurry up den!! & don't forget the
milk & eggs! thanks for takin' the time!
LP. by all means... go on & on & on... i'm
glad to see you're still wit me!! thanks for comin'
in on this one heah!
O&S. draw flies??!! who? wha?? me??! nahhh...
neva dat, man!! thanks for the read&reply!
Emma. you always makin' me smile!! thanks!
$$RICH-NE$$. wow! did i REAL-LY inspire that
wonderful flow??! thank you for takin' the time to
leave this behind for me. it was a pleasant & sweet
A beautiful invitation.
My Goodness!!!! U never cease to amaze me
Anxiously awaiting the next round...
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