Black Poetry : ...come as you are.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    come as i am !
    forth i am who i am
    under the silver line
    of sweet love
    i face my days of
    rejection
    i seek out ya everlasting
    yet i know not of ya
    true love u vow
    forth i am coming
    unto ya arms
    of pure love
    letting ya rays of
    shyne brighten my way
    in ya arm i may lay
    upon da chest
    of beauty
    and with me i bring
    comfort u yet to feel
    da spirit of love
    u lone to touch
    the emotional
    bliss of desires
    i'm coming !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    FLYGHT NIGHT of ROMANCE >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece Sunshyne, love ya work.
    *Emma*
     
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    you already know how i feel so i'm not gonna go on and on about it. (lol)
    great poem like always
    cant wait for more
     
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    Elayne,

    I'm comin'!!!! :lol:

    Very poignant flow my dear!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol at shery...jus too much. lol...otay, otay, otay. i'm over it. now, sweet sunshyne, you know i'm lovin' this one, too. keep on scribin', as i continue to watch, dear friend.
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i feel so much love in this piece

    this is the ultimate invitation
    that only a fool could turn down

    leaving the open heart hear
    in an attempt to get what you want
    GA_ thanks for the
    sunshyne this morning

    dssNY
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanks.


    Soja. ahhhh! someone gets it! :) i'm glad you
    enjoyed the piece. the ultimate invite, huh? thanks
    for sayin' dat sweetie!! :heart:

    KL. you are the silliest!! :lol: i appreciate you
    takin' the time to come ova & show some luv!! :D

    BigHead. hurry up den!! :D & don't forget the
    milk & eggs! :wink: thanks for takin' the time! :heart:

    LP. by all means... go on & on & on... :lol: i'm
    glad to see you're still wit me!! :D thanks for comin'
    in on this one heah! :heart:

    O&S. draw flies??!! who? wha?? me??! nahhh...
    neva dat, man!! :D thanks for the read&reply! :heart:

    Emma. you always makin' me smile!! thanks! :)

    $$RICH-NE$$. wow! did i REAL-LY inspire that
    wonderful flow??! thank you for takin' the time to
    leave this behind for me. it was a pleasant & sweet
    surprise!! :heart:
     
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    A beautiful invitation.

    BE
     
  10. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Goodness!!!! U never cease to amaze me :)
    Anxiously awaiting the next round...