Black Poetry : come and get me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Feb 5, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u can't be seriuos
    "snake in da garden"
    for any soul who eva felt like this


    Come and get me
    I’m lost
    In myself
    Low self-esteem
    Am I dirt?
    The poles of attraction
    Becomes a distraction
    In every action
    I’m mashing
    Losing every note I’m stashing
    Why am I taking this lashing

    Come and get me
    I return to the street
    Cuz I’m trying to find
    That line
    That snaps
    To the point of my grind
    The light that shine
    And swells in the darkest minds
    In realization
    We got the darkest minds

    Come and get me
    The animal, the mammal
    The sweat
    Dehydrates my wicked soul
    I perspired with Osama and the camel
    For I am just as he
    I too cause misery
    Of those not even direct of me
    Indirectly,
    I disrespect me
    And where my set be
    Only a fool if I would upset me

    Come and get me
    For my deuces, nobody show solemn
    Structurally I break
    If someone snatch my column
    And shear results as the fracture
    I wanna be captured
    And put in a statue
    Cuz I didn’t have to
    Be a disaster
    My heart pump faster
    As I try to find out who is the master

    Come and get me
    Cuz on the last note
    Was the spoke
    Who was victim of jokes?
    And those who poked
    Fun at the oak
    Of the tree
    Can not see me
    I can not see me
    For if not me,, I flee
    To a place of glee
    That seems to be
    A figment in my mind
    And the B

    Come and get me
     
  2. ~Provakativ~

    ~Provakativ~ Active Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...and raw

    Love that kind of poetry brotha
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good one...flow it poet
    strong indeed
    liking this
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte smooth scribing wit heat ....whoaaaaaa !!