Black Poetry : COmb Huh?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Oct 15, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    li-ber-ty
    lie-ber-ty
    lib-her-ty
    li
    ber
    ty
    free
    dom
    doom
    dumb
    one
    wun
    won
    native
    nation
    stolen
    under
    God
    they
    never prayed too
    never
    preyed 2
    preyed on
    every
    group of
    people they
    en
    countered
    in countered
    incognito
    can't recognize the
    demon
    dee-man
    de-mon
    se-man
    tainted with colonistic
    values
    and **** the
    beginning
    of civilization
    civil
    ization
    seive ilization
    falling through the holes
    in to the cuffs of
    this nation
    nay tion
    nay
    who doesn't agree
    with what I'm saying?
    who cares...who fears...
    who cheers...sometimes
    people don't want to re
    cog
    nize
    ...it's easier
    being in a co
    ma
    coma
    comb
    huh?

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    DAMMMMMMMMMMMMM !!! :toast:

    I am soooo loving this BlakMan ... BlakVerb!!

    Wow!

    :heart:

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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes BLAK
    you are back

    this is the illest
    dun
    this is phat dun

    yo i'm feeling the stregth

    dun

    BITS
    words dont' do justice
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repost
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Comb huh???????

    shooot man, you got me ova here shakin this here afro like whoa!!!!!!!!!!







    One
     
  6. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this must be one of the most well put together poems i've ever read. the words......just.....DAM! i don't even know what to say! so creative. i'm loving it. in the highest form of poetry praise: "I wish I had written this!" very nice, poet. very nice.
     
  7. Nichelle

    Nichelle New Member MEMBER

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    I am feeling this piece. I love the form, it is one that is ORIGINAL, no doubt.

    Blessings~
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    guess i slept on this one.

    definitely agree.

    *standing as one*
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte...so very tight!
     
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    this is just as good aloud as it is written...
     
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