Black Poetry : Com-Ple-shun

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Earthly Allure, Mar 26, 2004.

  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Com-ple-shun

    Like the
    potency of
    strong Brandy in my
    system;
    I found myself str8t
    taken by you.
    My Titain,
    My Amazon,
    My Nefertiti
    My Tiye.
    You swirl within
    my sepia colored
    flow;
    Delicious and
    soothing
    and Oh-so-Tropical.
    I am hypnotized
    and theorized.
    Feeling the
    sparks of
    your
    pretty dark eyes.
    Content to be the flame
    burning on your candle.
    Your passion, love and integrity;
    mail ordered, delivered and
    shipping&handling free.
    When you breath, I
    then become me.
    Your profile
    has me speechless and out of tune.
    Your brand nubian, wholesome and heady
    scrumptuous and deep, so deep like
    sand dune`s
    And I just want to loose myself
    in your golden, jazzy riffs;
    your
    smooth old soul trails,
    and deep soul-stirring gospel invocations.
    I...
    feel...
    brand new...
    in you...
    Completion...

    Copyright 2004 A.D/ "Suga Shack Inc."
    *Suhltryy
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    diggin ya flows
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte indeed poeticly sprayed to canvas
    do ya thing poet
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like the way you complete your thoughts onto the page, keep the flow going.
     
  5. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Yeah :spin: :spin:
    This is poetic language at it's best
    Nothing like that "one" to make you
    Feel ths way
    Nice!!!!!!



    PEACE AND LOVE
     
  6. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So much love! Thank you all. Blessings and much peace to you. God bless
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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