Black Poetry : Color Me "Bad"

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she told me no

    she told me go

    but she holds me so gently everytime we blow

    our chance to glow

    it's too dark to know

    if our river flows up or down

    but i love her frown

    as much as her nouns

    he has her crown

    but i have her crayons

    it think we're even as long as my Crayola

    continues to lay on

    her charm



    love,

    howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how divine and sweet as this reach out
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving this endearing play on words, guess she has colored you love.
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i guess she has :love:

    thanks watzinaname



    i don't know $$rich$$

    it's hard to tell without her :cook:
     
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