Black Poetry : Collide

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Aug 8, 2003.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I tell it to all
    This one is so raw
    I tell a tail
    Heard before
    Just redemption knocking at your door

    I've seen it all
    Known life and pain
    I've wept
    Till I could not weep again

    I am small
    In a world dominated by men

    And go unseen
    Time and time again

    Redundant
    There's power and clarity
    In my assumptions
    I have found a new strength

    THat is not human gained
    It's access is divine
    Not power that is mine

    And joy
    Floods my soul
    You let me know

    That You're in control

    I know

    You let me know

    When I collide

    With the ambition of fate

    When I....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look at ya pen flow
    dis was very nicely pose'd
     
  3. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can feel this as if it was me writing it
    str8 from the heart
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Raw power indeed!
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He's always in control...the "Divine"

    Resting in him,
    Angelicsage
     
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