Higher Standard Required : Collateral Damage

Lesanecrooks

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Ode a une femme

Les armes ne s'offre pas aux hommes
Ont cherchent les armes
Et quand la femme s'offre a nous
Ont cherchent des femmes
Vient donc me teindre de tes pleurs
Que je bois a long flots votre degout
D'etre trahie et de prendre le blame
De ses savoir amoureuse de l'un de nous

Mon coeur fut si froid
Mon coeur est semblable a une feuille d'automne
Ensevelli de neige sans tombe sans forme
Les hommes l'oublie mais le soleil s'en rappelle
Tu es mon soleil et tu m'as ramener a merveille

Qu'il m'est doux
Il m'est plus doux de parler que de vous!
Que d'avoir l'eloquence du latin sur ma langue
Et quelle est cette douceur qui rend ivre de vivre?
Aussi loin que les yeux de Dieu peuvent voir
Je me suis regarder et je vous ai vu
Car vous etes au plus profond de mon etre

Et combien d'amants espere au lever du jour
Qu'une colombes livre un message d'amour?
Qui me connait sait que j'oublie tout sur une montagne
Sauf Dieu, ma Mere, et vous Christina Chassagne
Nelligan dit chut mais je divulgue
Que desormais les poetes auront beau ecrire
Mais devant vos yeux leurs talents sont en fugue!

Oui devant vos yeux, devant tes yeux
La beauter creole a charmer ton portrait
Et si je t'aurai vu sucer ton pouce
J'aurais prier ciel de ne plus ses lever
Lors'que tu dors, dort alors ma douce

Je suis patient, Je suis sincere...
 

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Lesanecrooks said:
Ode a une femme

Les armes ne s'offre pas aux hommes
Ont cherchent les armes
Et quand la femme s'offre a nous
Ont cherchent des femmes
Vient donc me teindre de tes pleurs
Que je bois a long flots votre degout
D'etre trahie et de prendre le blame
De ses savoir amoureuse de l'un de nous

Mon coeur fut si froid
Mon coeur est semblable a une feuille d'automne
Ensevelli de neige sans tombe sans forme
Les hommes l'oublie mais le soleil s'en rappelle
Tu es mon soleil et tu m'as ramener a merveille

Qu'il m'est doux
Il m'est plus doux de parler que de vous!
Que d'avoir l'eloquence du latin sur ma langue
Et quelle est cette douceur qui rend ivre de vivre?
Aussi loin que les yeux de Dieu peuvent voir
Je me suis regarder et je vous ai vu
Car vous etes au plus profond de mon etre

Et combien d'amants espere au lever du jour
Qu'une colombes livre un message d'amour?
Qui me connait sait que j'oublie tout sur une montagne
Sauf Dieu, ma Mere, et vous Christina Chassagne
Nelligan dit chut mais je divulgue
Que desormais les poetes auront beau ecrire
Mais devant vos yeux leurs talents sont en fugue!

Oui devant vos yeux, devant tes yeux
La beauter creole a charmer ton portrait
Et si je t'aurai vu sucer ton pouce
J'aurais prier ciel de ne plus ses lever
Lors'que tu dors, dort alors ma douce

Je suis patient, Je suis sincere...

Lesanecrooks ... Hello and Welcome ... :wave:

Do you mind translating the above for me? In English please?

Thanks.

:heart:

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translation, i think it was meant for the poetry forum..

Ode has a woman

The weapons does not offer itself to the men Have look for the weapons And when the woman offers herself has
Have us look for women Comes therefore to tint me of your pleurs That I drink has long waves your etre degout
betrayed and to take the blame Of its knowledges in love of the one of us

My heart was so cold My heart is similar has a fall leaf snow Ensevelli without falls without forms The men
forgets it but the sun itself in remembers You are my sun and you have me to bring back has wonder

What it is me soft It is me more soft to speak than of you! What to have the eloquence of the Latin on my language And which is this softness
that renders drunk to live? Also far as the eyes of God can see I am to look at myself and I saw you For you etes to the deepest one of my etre

And how much lovers espere to the to get up day That A doves delivers a love message? Who me connait knows that I forget all on a mountain Except
God, my Mere, and you Christina Chassagne Nelligan said hush but I divulge That desormais the poetes will have beautiful ecrire But in front of
your eyes their talents are some runs away!

Yes in front of your eyes, in front of your eyes The beauter creole has to charm your portrait And if I will
have see you sucked your thumb I WOULD HAVE to pray sky of not more its to get up Lors'que you sleep, sleeps
then my soft one

I am patient, I am sincere...


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bet it won't get banned by "Accident"

wait shouldn't i be banned right now?

so... like.. are my other names unbanned?
 

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KRY ... i dun told you ... my patience is nothing like in the old days, folk get banned quick fast and in a hurry now ... for even looking like they finna carry on krazee up in here.

It's good to have you back ... i hope you stay forever this time ... :love:

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Destee said:
KRY ... i dun told you ... my patience is nothing like in the old days, folk get banned quick fast and in a hurry now ... for even looking like they finna carry on krazee up in here.

It's good to have you back ... i hope you stay forever this time ... :love:

:heart:

Destee

.o0( Isnt it amazing how he can continue to invade. Yet a dues paying member cant even find his stuff :bazooka: :drink: :ref: :bullseye:
 

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Kemetstry said:
.o0( Isnt it amazing how he can continue to invade. Yet a dues paying member cant even find his stuff :bazooka: :drink: :ref: :bullseye:
Kemetstry ... you're so spoiled ... you just don't want me to love anyone other than you ... :nono:

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Destee said:
KRY ... i dun told you ... my patience is nothing like in the old days, folk get banned quick fast and in a hurry now ... for even looking like they finna carry on krazee up in here.
Man...you guys don't play around.

It is a good thing though, because I have seen many forums go to the crapper due to far too relaxed "moderation". Anyhow, I hope I don't become "collateral damage", because I can get a bit into the spiritual and philosophical discussions.

hotep...
 

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ShemsiEnTehuti said:
Man...you guys don't play around.

It is a good thing though, because I have seen many forums go to the crapper due to far too relaxed "moderation". Anyhow, I hope I don't become "collateral damage", because I can get a bit into the spiritual and philosophical discussions.

hotep...
Brother ShemsiEnTehuti ... Hello and Welcome ... :wave:

I don't believe you have to worry about becoming "collateral damage" ... :love:

Brother That Jones Boy posted a really great response in the What is an Internet Troll Thread. He highlighted the challenge we are faced with, in determining whether someone is here to disrupt or simply passionate about what they believe. We strive to be inclusive, rather than exclusive, which makes our job even more difficult. I really can't say it much better than he did, so i'm quoting him below.


That Jones Boy said:
But also a lot of peope will use the word troll against someone with strong views that maybe unpopular but may also have some validity or are at least a genuine opinion worthy of debating.

Quite often on a forum a certain amount of members may call someone a troll while the other half of the membership may see the person as just a genuinely strongly opinionated person with strong views.
I'm sure you'll be okay Brother! :)

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