Black Poetry : Collaborate Wit' God

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Oct 7, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the blues

    Seduce you baby

    It takes all your joy away

    Ain't no pretty picture

    We'll be urging ya'll to pray

    Cause...

    Once it's dark inside

    Old evil,

    Gets to play

    Embody the church

    Show that liar the door

    Your mosque,

    That's hot to trot

    In God's house

    Can't be ignored

    Let's pray together neighbor

    Collaborate to win the war

    Oh...

    Some may speak in tongues

    Others say prophesy

    Is what they heard

    Saints hit that holy water

    Holy Ghost,

    All in their swerve ~

    Being in the Spirit

    Know which way to turn

    It don't get no better in Mecca

    Or Jerusalem

    But don't throw out your Torah

    Holy Bible,

    Or Koran

    Collaborate wit' God

    Meet The Father

    Through love's song


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and many blessing
    this was very refreshing
    Peace
     
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    1poet, this is wonderful. Peace and blessings to you. :)
     
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    I absolutely love this....unifying the one true thing we have in common!

    Beautiful work 1poet...only you could have brought it like this!

    :jumping::jumping::jumping::jumping::jumping::jumping::jumping:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    love this...sweet my brother
     
  6. triniti424

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    yes indeed because through him all things are possible...I believe it and live it bless you for this piece/peace my brotha :)
     
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    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    This was definately a brighter note to a horrible day! Thank you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very touching looking to da heavens
    love this flow of scribe here
     
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    Beautiful work. This piece sings.
     
  10. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talking About A Revolution...

    One God, One love. Defeat the enemy!
     
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