Black Poetry : ~~!!*COLD WINDS*!!~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Sep 21, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kem's "I'm Missing Your Love"
    plays in my ears....


    Kem's "I'm missing Your Love"
    plays in my ears....

    My mental is disturbed and
    my system unbalanced
    while I sit completely perturbed.

    Look around the room.
    Eyes taking in
    Tear drenched pillows,
    rumpled sheets and a bed in disarray.
    Objects askew and paintings on the ground
    like abstract dew.
    Somewhere along the way I dreamt....
    no, I experienced and soon realized
    that there was a scream deep in me
    that needed to see the light and sound
    of day outside of me.
    Bitten fingernails and
    and the etchings of pain across the
    canvas of my face; I can hardly
    recognize the old me and for the first time
    in my lifetime I’m living in funky, hard
    captivity.

    Today the sun sends me another day and
    I wipe the frost off of my window.
    For the first time I'm staring at
    the reflection of pain and a chilling feel of
    loneliness.
    On the floor scattered are
    torn letters and declarations of
    love, affection and an eternity....
    Breathless echoes of passion and laughter...
    nothing more but empty visions and
    colorless images.

    Clenched tissues drenched in snot, saliva and
    the salty taste of tears.
    An entire night's worth of deep pain and
    feelings of being abysmal.
    On the table next to the bed,
    a half empty glass of whiskey...last night
    Jack Daniels was my bed partner.
    Last night he held me in his arms and
    numbed my raw and ragged feelings and for a
    time I sailed far beyond this s***!

    In a locked room, sitting by the window
    lost in memories of the shining past and bleak-a**
    future I refuse to walk in the social stream.
    How can I when I entertain such pain and thoughts
    of murder?
    I never knew what it felt like to hear someone
    tell you...


    There is no us, because I Never Loved You!

    Copyright 2004
    ~PropheticNsyght
    the black 'Othello'
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was posed well i so enjoyed the flow
    thank you for sharing with us
     
  3. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are truly beautiful honey and I thank you so much for your love and support.
     
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    Words, so harsh and cold they send a chill up our spines, and in our souls. This was laden with tearful images. Heart wrenching flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very aweson flowing like how u did this
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby love thank you for your love and support. This piece literally drained me!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich you are always in my corner. Thank you love.