Black Poetry : Cold Steel in Hand

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cold
    steel
    in hand
    an ice cold
    hand
    rough from
    caressing reality
    to check it's
    PuLsE.....
    yes it's alive.....
    that's why I.....
    grip this
    steel / ready
    to fire after aiming
    for the center
    of the cranium.....
    no.....beneath the cranium
    to split the hemispheres
    of the left and right side
    separate
    creative from
    analytical
    detach the
    retinas of clouded
    third eyes
    'til lies wilt and die
    cold steel
    platinum
    PEN
    cold ink
    flowing
    waiting to
    dye unbreathing
    minds

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you the shooter let me be ya first target. verb you have hipped a sista beyond measures in your works. yo messages are being received and processed.



    One
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaK-NeSs....


    umm... after you shoot Zorbi... you think i can be next? (LOL)

    it goes without sayin' that you keep it continuously tyght!
    you bring da things that make us feel... & i am grateful.

    OneLuv.
    Ga~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ahhhhh MY BRUTHA YA ON POINT
    BUT DON'T SHOOT ALL DA LADIES DOWN
    FLOW HEAD ON ,,,,,,YA HEARD ME!
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes son

    loving the art
    as always verb
    hitting all cylinders
     
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    verb,

    check the clip to see if its full cuz you've been doing some "poetic drive-bys" lately...

    mad tight bro...mad tight...twin
     
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    Tyrone Active Member MEMBER

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    My Brotha

    Dig how you provoke thought. Your stuff is constantly on hit!

    Ty
     
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    OH YEEEEAH!!

    feelin this most definitely
    verb...
    we should start writing now!
    read my short story in the
    short story forum...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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