Black Haiku : Cold Shower

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    Whoever said that
    a cold shower would work, was
    wrong, I'm still on fire
     
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    cold water shower
    works u just to extreme now
    only thing helps is !
     
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    Pigs must be flying
    cause the man of love says that
    I am too extreme... :?:

    And what's more, how can
    proper punctuation (!) ease
    this "situation"? :laugh:
     
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    the phone wakes me up
    cold shower brings me to life
    you bring me to heat
     
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    From your single touch
    seek cold water for relief
    and turn it to mist
     
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    Standing outside in
    the cold rain shower, each drop
    subdues inner flames
     
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    a hot summer day
    the cold rain showering me
    the red sun smiling...
     
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    I'm dizzy from heat
    you touch me like acid rain
    the cold brings relief
     
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    The steam drifts off
    his damp skin, I can smell the
    intense heat rising
     
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    My faucet rains down
    cold water, massage my soul
    cause it's been engulfed
     
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