Black Poetry : Cold Reality

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  1. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First of all, i don't know why i titled this "cold reality" Just came to my mind.
    Plus it's been a while since i wrote anything But here it goes.....



    As i lay there

    My head on her chest….. heart beating
    I could hear her deep heart beat ……., the rhythm of our pumping hearts was in sync.
    The Urge to caress the ridges on her chest was irresistible
    I held her tightly and in our hearts our love for each other grew stronger
    The scent of her curly hair was lingering
    I kissed her lips… tasted its warmth as if my life depended on it.
    She seemed closer than she was supposed to be
    Suddenly… the room becomes pregnant with silence
    Then harsh cold reality slaps me in the face
    I open my eyes….. it was all a dream
    I smile and picked up my phone
    Sent her an SMS………

    “I’m in love with you”
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and that's true hard cold facts ...I hear ya !
     
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    Thanks bruh. Thanks for reading.
     
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    That's how it is, and that's when you know. Good one.
     
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    Thanks for reading.
     
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    This is modern poetry. I like your style!
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ibrahim...

    I do not even know what to say...this poem was deep.
    This is the first poem I have read in a while, and this was a great opener. Especially comming from you!
    Greetings.
     
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    hey ,this one is a beauty..
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey PLATINUMILLITY1, Thanks for Reading sis.
    I miss u.
     
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