Black Poetry : COLD OF DARKNESS

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On the edge
    of internal plight
    breathes eternal sighs
    of her ill-fated life.

    Sought, didn't find
    sturdy shoulders to rest
    the flow of tears
    from her wilting eyes
    which no longer could hide
    the turmoil churning
    deep down inside.

    In the freezing
    cold of darkness,
    her once wilting eyes,
    now stare lifeless,
    and forever tell
    of a hurt worse
    than her fragile soul
    could ever reveal.

    (For my friend who is no longer here. I miss her, deeply. She is forever etched in my memories. I wish her soul much peace.)
     
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    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :(... i felt your sorrow in this piece... but i loved the flow... i pray there will soon be relief for your grief...

    peace
     
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    really liked this...flow was most def on point...keep it up
     
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    :toast: :toast: :toast: live fa real!
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi NADIA,

    Thank you so much!! I know in time the pain will subside. Until that day, kind words like yours will help tremendously!!

    Thanks for the read!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Ipoet,

    It is good to hear from you!! Thanks so much for your nice comment. I appreciate it, deeply!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey MORE,

    Thanks for the read!! I am so thankful for your lovely thoughts!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    FEEL THIS!

    Your pen is packed with sentiment! :heart:
     
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    feeling the poets pain!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi 1 Poet,

    Thanks for your kind comments. They certainly help relieve my grief.

    All my love to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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