Black Poetry : CoLd NiGhTs

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 17, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cold winters would bite into her skin
    infatuating her heart with cold....
    maybe one day she will be able to escape...
    the clouds swirled around her..
    signaling a prelude to a vicious storm
    that would beat on the windowpanes
    of her bed room...

    she would sleep lightly
    contemplating the world's purpose in her
    long-anticipated nightly slumbers....
    she would fall asleep with her fingers
    falling cleverly on the loose papers from work
    sprawling lazily across her bed...

    her dreams would unleash a paradox
    that was confined to a to her intricate subconsiousness
    enlightenment would make her run to her flows
    like she was 500 miles into the Sahara Desert
    with no oasis to substain her poetic hunger
    for the flows that she didn't even have to think about....

    she was finally free.....

    to be continued....

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    yahsistah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brilliant!!!

    your wisdom and knowledge is great
    i can only imagine that will just
    get better as u grow
    keep it up sistah
    you give me faith and hope in the future
    for my own children
    much love and blessings
    shalom yah
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yah glad u like it....just tryin to spread words of wisdom to all...
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    To think that your flows can only get better the story, I have no words for that thought. And you described the scene of being at a loss for words masterfully.
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely divine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :thanks: :jawdrop:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hheeyyy watz...i try to convey what comes naturally...i don't have to think when i write i just feel....ya know?...lol

    Dior/Allure...thanks brotha i'm glad that u feelin my flows, just tryin to keep up with u...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Hey Story....
    Wow sweetness...you hit that top shelf...when I read this ...it was so nice and so real, for a moment you had my head :spinn: ...I got dizzy and then I had to stop and collect myself...but susprise I wasn't. you are the greatest.
    please continue to spit it out :puke:
    luv to u always...queentswana
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks queen i appreciate the kind words...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Nice Poem. Nice Poem.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love mani
    :kiss:
    -Mz.Behavin
     
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