Black Poetry : cold hearted

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    t_ouch New Member MEMBER

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    sorry no puntuation jus free styling


    I have been hurt so many times, my heart wears a perminant scar. Countless tears abstrain me to self rehibilitation. Not being able to have any affiance in a consort. Promiscuouity taking the place of amorousness. Realizing the only real love for me is self love, that offering my body up to another is only making me loose my purity. After so many storms I have been able to find me again without intamacy. So my once cold heart has turned to gold and I won't tarnish it again or give it away until I find one to build a fellowship with.
     
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    this was deep
    this touched me
    I can relate 4 real 4 REAL
    u should free style sum mo
     
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    t_ouch New Member MEMBER

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    thnx man i got some more i was going through it last night
     
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    i relate to that. purity is wonderful. i want to remain this way
     
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    its hard to, lol
     
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    welcome to destee.com postic playground
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    welcome from above as i bless this dip some love
    welcome t_ouch !!!!!

    Tyte drop love the flip of it
    look to read more of you as u share and give love within
     
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    re:Cold

    Excellent! :flowers:
     
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    Finding you was the best thing you could have done, in doing so...you fine life.
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