Black Poetry : Cold Hearted

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    windchill factor,
    nearly
    below negative zero.
    Cold glances
    and
    medusa-turned-to stone advances.
    The
    veins full of
    ice instead of blood
    leaving me with
    the impression
    of a cold,
    merciless winter.
    She speaks in a voice
    dead calm,
    absent of warmth
    and any sign
    of
    life.
    I'm chilling with
    the deadly calm
    of a
    cold-hearted
    woman.

    Copyright 2004 A.D/ "Suga Shack Inc."
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    very chilling indeed
    nice drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Yes, this scribe placed me on the North Pole, a frigid feeling indeed. This poem was tight.
     
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    Sweetly layered
    Almost cryptic!!!!
    Very nice
    I like the feel and flow of this one
    *brrrr* :cool:
     
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    Interesting....

    I like this. It seems very dangerous.... as if there is something that the woman is stalking, or perhaps protecting... fending for her life, maybe....

    Thanks for sharing....

    Brooke
     
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    You all or so beautiful and i'm blessed to be surrounded by you all. Thank you and God bless,
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    wow, I love the rhythm of this piece, EA. Really makes the point.
     
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    nice I like it
     
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