Black Poetry : Cold Fish

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Nov 9, 2016.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cold Fish
    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Here comes one cold fish
    he on that head trip
    all about himself
    but don't worry
    none

    We made the dean's list
    when it comes to
    us being able
    swimmers ~

    But it serves no useful purpose
    for us to continue to swim
    against the current,
    one without the
    other

    Our
    school
    learned long ago
    a valuable lesson...
    that it's better to know
    exactly who the predators are



    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought ~ lift ME up
     
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    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Very nice flow 1poetsought
    Knowing who the predators are is key
     
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