Black Poetry : Cold Blood Confusion

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I awoke in the dimness,
    in a drug addled haze,
    tripping on snowflake
    in confusion and dazed.

    The face on the pillow
    was colder than ice,
    eyes staring at nothing,
    last roll of the dice.

    I looked in the mirror
    standing next to the chair,
    imagine my confusion,
    when I saw nobody there.

    Blood stains on the bedsheet,
    cold steel on the floor,
    leather straps on the bed posts,
    dead locks on the door.

    The last thing I remember,
    they came in white coats,
    I can’t escape this dream,
    was the last thing I wrote.


    Ra


    :eek:
     
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    Alright now...I saw this! Good!!!!!
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nightmares or reality?

    I was playing with trippin in and trippin out

    Ra

    :)
     
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    I love your vignettes... they are scenes that beg to be acted out and mounted in a play displaying all kinds of human conditions.

    You know you got skillz that are unreal!

    alyce
     
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    run man run
    that **** is scurry
     
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    Ra

    Feelin the creativity behind this!!!

    Reas
     
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    i love the way you display
    your mind thoughts because
    it causes mind to work...
    thanks...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Amun-RA,

    nice work brother...keep scribing...

    blak
     
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    The Poet's Poet doing his thing. Write it Ra!

    BE
     
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    in the face of death...there is the mundane. when there is no face in the mirror, to whom do we look?

    ditto, Ms A.
     
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