Black Poetry : Coitus

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  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    was when
    my lips
    wrapp'd
    around yo words
    we intercoursin'
    and creatin
    climatic metaphors
    and euphemisms about
    what life was...
    coitus when
    we rawly
    f*&!'d
    our
    thoughts together
    bringing walls down and reveling
    in the spilled seed of
    affirmation.
    the goal
    has always been
    to have u kneel btwn
    my thighs, secrete
    blood engorged and
    stiff wisdom
    leavin me
    impregnated...yo
    intellect swimmin in me;
    i got labor
    pains and my ambiotic
    fluids spill dusk and twilights
    down my thighs...
    now i'll
    give birth to
    crystalline sunsets and the
    scent of hyacinth.
    D*^n! honey
    you show know how to
    coitus me
    to apex
    and down to abyss...
    we gon
    flood our systems
    with each otha's
    seed and
    live...
    just live, no regrets...
    no distractions...

    ...just live!




    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    like the innuendo in this

    word play and all that

    touching art and sex in an overt way

    nice touch here poet

    peace
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo So'ja...preciate you poet!
     
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    this was tyte.........love da play on words and how u mastered this piece
     
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    Brotha Rich...thank you man for feeling me!
     
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    Filling each other with words, brimming with suggestive stimulation, reaching way past copulation, and bringing both to mutual joy. Awesome write, whew!!!
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sister Watz...you're a blessing mami! thank you.
     
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