Black Poetry : Coitus and Beneath the Trees

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Legendof_1_Spirit, Apr 5, 2005.

  1. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 14, 2001
    Messages:
    185
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    somewhere out there
    Ratings:
    +5
    Coitus

    Within the deep dark stillness of a silent night that whisper passion
    You are the fullness of the universe
    The brightest star reflected in the sky seen through enchanted eyes
    A tender cloud that embraces the satin silverness of the moon
    A shower of lush kisses that burn desire into every corner of the room
    The voice of the wind flowing smooth and feverish over my skin
    The calm fluid restlessness of tropical seas that I thirst to swim in

    Within the fresh sweetness of you I am seduction causing the tides
    to rise and fall...



    Beneath the Trees

    Take my hand
    Will you?
    And let us walk
    Together for a while
    Just you and I
    Two friends beneath
    Shady boughs
    Of tall oaks
    Living skyscrapers
    Waving with leafy smiles
    Illuminating us with dazzling starbursts
    Of light radiant and bright
    Let us admire
    The peace tranquility and serenity
    Of solitude shared
    Between hearts that burn
    With passion for life
    As the clouds
    Visible yet intangible
    Embrace and stare
    As they stroll across the sky
    As we float beneath
    Under the trees
    Together as one
    A singular pair that share
    The comfort of a touch
    Soft and strong
    The assurance of a smile
    Bright and warm
    The infinite joy of a single moment
    Held forever within the arms of a kiss...


    BCB/Legendof_1_Spirit
    2005
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    4,912
    Likes Received:
    613
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    (RF) Technician
    Location:
    ( Alonewolf ) California.. by way of the LOU
    Ratings:
    +795
    Within the deep dark stillness of a silent night that whisper passion
    You are the fullness of the universe
    The brightest star reflected in the sky seen through enchanted eyes
    A tender cloud that embraces the satin silverness of the moon
    A shower of lush kisses that burn desire into every corner of the room
    The voice of the wind flowing smooth and feverish over my skin
    The calm fluid restlessness of tropical seas that I thirst to swim in

    Within the fresh sweetness of you I am seduction causing the tides
    to rise and fall...

    =========

    What a sweet couple union. This poem touch the union of a man and woman, the part each plays in that union, for a woman is the sweet seduction that makes a man's tide ebb and flow.


    Take my hand
    Will you?
    And let us walk
    Together for a while
    Just you and I
    Two friends beneath
    Shady boughs
    Of tall oaks
    Living skyscrapers
    Waving with leafy smiles
    Illuminating us with dazzling starbursts
    Of light radiant and bright
    Let us admire
    The peace tranquility and serenity
    Of solitude shared
    Between hearts that burn
    With passion for life
    As the clouds
    Visible yet intangible
    Embrace and stare
    As they stroll across the sky
    As we float beneath
    Under the trees
    Together as one
    A singular pair that share
    The comfort of a touch
    Soft and strong
    The assurance of a smile
    Bright and warm
    The infinite joy of a single moment
    Held forever within the arms of a kiss...

    ===============

    Wow.. what a visual. :picture: Just being with someone special and enjoying life. Poet you have dropped another masterpiece. Thanks for sharing .
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 7, 2004
    Messages:
    743
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Educator
    Location:
    Indianapolis, IN
    Ratings:
    +4
    very nice drops poet. keep them coming :jawdrop:
     
  4. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Dec 20, 2004
    Messages:
    10,724
    Likes Received:
    6,428
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    A+ technician
    Location:
    The rotten Apple
    Ratings:
    +6,486
    peace,

    This is a very calming & inspirational piece. I had visions of romantic walks in the park as I was reading this tyte scribe.........

    flow on poet................

    peace
     
  5. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 24, 2001
    Messages:
    193
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    A Supervisor at the Sheriff's Department
    Location:
    Kokomo, Indiana
    Ratings:
    +4
    WOW

    I COULD IMAGINE MY HAND BEING HELD AS I WALKED WITH A FIGURE THAT WAS ABLE TO GUIDE MY HEART TO THAT PLACE IN LOVE .... AWESOME SCRIBE ... I WANT MORE .... :whip:
     
  6. Awriter'ssoul

    Awriter'ssoul Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 23, 2004
    Messages:
    13
    Likes Received:
    2
    Ratings:
    +2
    This is such a beautiful poem.
    I LOVED it.
    Love expressed so well.
     
  7. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 25, 2004
    Messages:
    1,512
    Likes Received:
    31
    Location:
    MICHIGAN
    Ratings:
    +31
    wooowweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i liked that...yeh yeh..that was nice...
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Such a serene and earthy stroll it was, the words seemed to float above the page with this write. Do flow on.
     
  9. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 6, 2005
    Messages:
    877
    Likes Received:
    9
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Mechanical Engineer
    Location:
    Educating the Diaspora
    Ratings:
    +9
    Thanks for sharing this piece poet.
     
  10. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    The trees have it!

    Loving your work, Legend.
     
Loading...