Black Poetry : Coincidence (561)

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  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t blink, because you might miss something important
    You might miss the style
    You might miss the elegance
    Or the grace in which they move

    To understand them is to know them
    You know them once you understand them, and the
    Rhythm in their eyes when looking into your eyes, is
    Oh so sweet,
    Never did they once miscalculate the pattern in your bright eyes
    Every step, every beat was seen and understood

    They are able to recite every conversation
    Not forgetting to whisper every secret
    To keep it from spreading to every ear
    So that is will not end up in every conversation

    They are able to catch you when you fall
    To give you that extra boost that’ll help you to rise from the ridicule
    Every harmony in your voice
    Was like a violin playing continuously;
    Its beauty is unmatched
    To even think about comparing it with another’s
    Is ridiculous! Because none is better than yours

    They were able 2 repeat every pause
    Every laugh and every cry
    Every blink form your eyes
    And YES, every lie
    Yet, you do nothing but skim through them
    Hoping to forget them
    Yet, you claim that they are not who you want?
    Only who you see?

    You’ve wondered how someone could be so cautious when seducing your mind
    It takes strategy
    Knowing when and what to do at the right time
    And this movement isn’t available to anyone
    They must first understand you
    To know is to understand you
    To know is to understand you
    To know is to understand you
    You, you…understand me?

    Don’t blink, just stand still and wait patiently
    Or you might miss the style
    You might miss the elegance
    Or the grace in which I move
    Or my elegant sound of beauty
    My rhythm in one sound is all so unique

    C, to know me is to understand me
    How can you know, if you don’t understand?
    Real understanding comes from knowing
    I understand you
    See, it is you who I must comprehend, now do you understand?

    -----MzPoetic 11●1o●o4
    ONE FOR THAT "561"
     
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    un-der-stand-a-ble 561 coincidence to know one is
    to understand to understand is to know well felt and
    tyte wisdomize flow .............standing still without a blink !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Easier to be open to others when we understand and know the uniqueness of ourselves. Very nice introspective drop.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this drop....enjoyed the wisdom you scribed....
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to ALL for the timeless love you are showing....and YES i may be young...but i def. don't have a YOUNG outlook on things :)...thanks the love is greatly appreciated
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzPoetic, to know you is to love you,

    and what fun it is getting to know you. :kiss2:
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww thanks 1poet....i don't know how to take that comment...lol...but thanks i appreciate it
     
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