Black Poetry : Cognac & Grand Marnier

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Sep 5, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~ramblings from the hope chest~

    ....look @ her

    she ova dere smilin,
    she fakin, doe
    so caught up in appearances...
    ooops, never admitted dat schhhhtuff befo

    yeah, she vain, & proud...

    and SELF~ISH
    .. (troof be told)...tearin down her house
    wit her own **** handz trynna get MO....
    when errybody thought she already
    had erry **** thang

    well whut tha heyell they know?
    'parently she di'nt think so-

    I don't xpect no one to unnerstan'
    what I'm sayin tonite

    see, "she drunk"

    and her mind ain't right...

    ....done had one too many
    be-otch never could
    hold her licker... :D

    & ohhhhh HEYELL nawwwww
    she ain't playin wit no 40 oz ....

    other thangs is much quicker

    she drankin tha Ko-nee-yak and tha
    Grand Mahnyay.... nig'GAHHHZ!!!!
    what they call it ...?
    a French ConneKshun?

    she got thangs on her mind..
    she BIZZY~ she PRE~ OCK~ Q~ PIED
    she DEEP IN THOUGHT.... and what not

    dreams of how many degreez of
    separation can she live wit pleez?
    & visions of divorce court dancin in her
    pickled ***/eff'd up head...
    neva mind whut mama, daddy and
    the pastor said...

    she thankin she gonna un-do some papers
    & toss them bad boyz like all them
    used up candy wrappers
    caught the vapors...

    EFF dat ESS y'all....

    we talkin LIBER - muhfuggin- RAY - SHUN,
    baybeeee!!!!!!!


    sheeeeeeeeeeeeeiiiiiitttttttt!!!!!!

    whut-a-sustah-need~whut-a-sustah-need in
    2k1....to set her wild *** free


    oh, my bad....

    xcuse my BLACKness...sometimes
    I can be so un~kooth ;)


    runnin my mouf bout thangs
    y'all might mistake as
    "actual"

    but when the buzz is onn
    who can tell whut's really "factual"???

    eyelids is heavy and tha nod
    is deep

    but it's all good...cuz

    see

    she smilin like a chess cat

    in her sleep....


    Alyce, 2001 (c)

    From "The Woman In My Attic"
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I repeat...do you know how mo' fo' tight your panties are???!!!

    Dayuuummmmm...even when u be drinking u be belching prophetically and with perfect prose-ture!!!!!

    I am loving this woman in the attic...I can see her too...clothes all tattered...rustling through her past...one day short of catching up with her future.....yeah...her clothes are old...but the panties are toooooo tight!!!

    *on-the-rocks*

    :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The attic
    So full of treasures...

    Thank you for this gem.

    BE
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    you must didn't hear me when you were at the bar so Immma say it again , keep openin that dayum chest of yours sis.



    One
     
  5. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~A

    Lovin this angle of approach..seeing her as if she's sittin' across from me..excellent work right here !

    peace
    g-man
     
  6. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms A

    Ms A Ms A Ms A
    sistah gurl is tooo feirce !!! go head wit yo bad self !:toast: :toast:
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in all your writings you have the ability to put the reader in "that" place and to make them "see" so clearly the picture you paint..this piece is no different....wonderful imagery created here..

    K
     
  8. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey alyce........

    This is a masterpeice.........I love the slang......:toast:
     
  9. JNubian

    JNubian Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well now Sista A, let me add my little sumpm' sumpm' like what my Gran used to say about being drunk and speakin' your sober thoughts.
    Your "stuff" (if you'll excuse the expression) is good beyond words.

    JNubian
     
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