Black Poetry : Cogitated Haiku #1

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Travelling on thoughts
    Looking for you in mynd scenes
    swaying to love's song

    (c) 2001 blakverb
     
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    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one...

    ...put me in 'serene mode'. Your depth extends, far, beyond the 'core'...
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MapleX,

    Thank you sister. I see that haiku posting has become "choice fare" so I may as well eat also. This is one of the most difficult poetic forms to write. I liken the difficulty to writing a Sestina.

    one love,blak
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb, you know I too loves the Haiku and I congratulate you for the Haiku you do. Difficult as it may be to write once they come out they be dynamyte!!!!! (stole that from JJ on Good Times)



    One
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You go boy~

    and he's so well rounded !!

    Much :heart:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "U"

    you are correct in the assertion that they are difficult to write, I think everyone needs to challenge themselves every now and then to see just "how powerful" they can make a few words become. A haiku is just that trying to leave a big impact in a few words/syllables.

    N2,

    well rounded? Why thank ya'


    one love,blak
     
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