Black Haiku : Codependent

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is your crossroad.
    freedom of choice is all yours.
    "which road should I take?"


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da path before u
    set by da father above
    now walk within he


    it a freedom ride
    laid in da crossroad u set
    u should take dat road!!!"
     
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    It's my decisions
    I choose the path of Wisdom.
    In darkness...He shines.
     
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    she has a sharp mind
    but just lacks self-confidence
    she's been worked over

    often she is told
    speak, your opinion matters
    trust in your judgement

    she tries but falls short
    it will take time and practice
    she'll gain confidence.

    Thanks for the input
    it's appreicated. :heart:


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    Gurl this is one tight haiku trip. The first verse was the hook for me personally. Thanks for sharing. :heart: