Black Poetry : Code Orange

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CODE ORANGE
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    What rhymes with orange?
    So... its come to that ~
    Paranoia so acute,
    Mad karma comin' back

    This notion isn't foreign
    When evil's on the set
    What goes around,
    Comes around,
    Orange... knows it best

    Bump it up to orange,
    Encoded fear... suit you
    As frightening as it is,
    You pretty scary too


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enough said....
     
  3. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one poet.


    short... sweet & to the point!

    i can dig it! :D

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i felt ya and most def on point
    code O.....
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CODE LOVE...

    1poetsought ~
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see you openin up stuff in here, what goes around comes around for real...... get ready for the hook



    One
     
  7. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Karma always gets its prey. The brevity of this piece works well here. I like it much.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Karma is a scary thing indead that why you have to think befor
    you act. know there going to say code Red.......
     
  9. Moses the Poet

    Moses the Poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's a lotta punch packed into only a few words.

    Felt. You exposed undeniable truth here.

    Much respect to you for your lucidity and bravery.

    Andrew
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Paranoia so acute, we hope ya'll comin' back-

    Much Love ~
     
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