Quiet Poetry Lounge : Cocoa Fingers

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tigereyes17, Mar 20, 2004.

  1. tigereyes17

    tigereyes17 New Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 20, 2004
    Messages:
    2
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    I,
    parted his hair
    with cocoa fingers
    while he rested his head
    beteen my thighs,
    closed brown eyes
    and whispered baby,
    as I,
    braided his mane
    insane,
    with the flow of
    love and rivers,
    quiet softness,
    rocking slowly,
    humming magic
    until we drifted
    like two leaves drifting
    in the breeze,
    and he slept,
    like a symphony composed.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    You painted such a peaceful, loving, genuine scene here. I really enjoyed this. Welcome to destee, hope to hear more from you.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    :wave: likes ya flow
    hope you share more....
    welcome within and enjoy
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    lovin it to the fullest
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    hi:wave: welcome
    this is nice flow
    keep it coming
    wonderful indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  6. tigereyes17

    tigereyes17 New Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 20, 2004
    Messages:
    2
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    =tigereyes17}thank you so much for the welcome and
    inspiration and i so appreciate it. :wave:
    tigereyes
     
Loading...