Black Poetry : Cocktail of Emotions

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    introducin ramblins of a confused heart series pt.1

    :confused:

    Why do i bother 2 settle this thing b/t us...
    This thing...this thing thats supposed to b called love.
    Seems like ur lovin me from a distance.
    Can u tell i need some...
    Assistance.
    I dont feel ur love, not in the slightest way.
    I need u 2 love me like the friend u claim to be.
    We've never said 'I love u' face 2 face.
    Is that a disgrace or fate rearin it's ugly head...
    Tellin me it's time to put this thing to bed.
    Maybe ur lovin me the best way u know how.
    But as it is right now...
    I need u 2 show me that u care,
    That u wanna b around me,
    That u wanna talk 2 me.
    In simple terms... i need u 2 love me.
    I never knew steppin out this hole called 'love' would b so hard.
    Maybe lovin u was wrong, but my heart swore up n down that it was right.
    I'm tired of fightin what i feel...
    So here's the deal...
    I'm lettin it burn.
     
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    That was deep, deep, deep and I like how you rounded that off...seems like you're in a "he loves me, he loves me not" state of mind. Very nice write.
     
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    the state of confusion is always difficult...
    you can't go back to the way things were
    and you don't know whether to move forward either
    you displayed this state of emotion so well
    it could be felt through reflection...

    Very nice...
     
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    deeply felt flow it's always captive but always a way
    very well felt
     
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    Yes, this was very deep ma. I was feelin' it. I guess you got to do like Usher and let it burn. But remember it won't burn forever ma and soon the water will put it out.
     
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    Just need to know one way of the other, nothing wrong with that. Posed on point.
     
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    MMMmm confusion is one heck of a disturbing feeling smh *sigh* write on poet :)
     
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    sorry it took me so long to respond fam. all ur support n love is greatly appreciated.

    queenstwana-- yes, he love me/he loves me not.the only option..love me w/all u got or dont love me at all

    sage-- yes, confused is what i am.im standin in quicksand...care 2 pull me out.lol

    rich--ur right... where theres a will, there's a way..i've just got to find it.

    foxi-- i wont b needin that water...its gonna burn to the crisp

    watz- thanx 4 the support

    triniti-- i know, i know... but we all have 2 b confused sometimes
     
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