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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside a story told
    ourside words flowz
    clues laid
    1 to 5 made
    she was perfect
    sweet and kind
    da woman to rock
    my mind
    quietly as it reveal
    and the name spill
    tonight i hope she
    don't mine how it
    was to shine from
    the mental mass
    to my caressin
    heart of love
    she leave me a clue
    as i wonder in mind
    and feel da depth
    sweet and divine

    she said !
    i'll call u my love
    i make u rise
    i spoke to u on
    the phone when
    u was alone i gave
    u a gift a hand and
    made a stand
    as u watch me
    laid into the beings
    from my clues u can
    reveal me so the
    world can see and
    my love end a mystery

    I humble said o'k tonight
    after my flyte to sho da light
    mind wonder not no more ...!
    it's tyme
     
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    tonight...... :laugh:
     
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    yayyyyyyy
    wonderfulllllllllllll :)
     
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    indeed it's tyme to reveal
    thankz sistah's
    angel & bluewater
     
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    alwayz keepin me posted to my chair.... i love it
     
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    thank u as it unfolds tonight
    most humble
     
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