Black Poetry : Clouds ~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 19, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Placards of love

    Hang time in your sky ~

    Appearing for you to see

    Moody as stormy weather

    Pretty as Billy Dee

    Fluffy and perpendicular
    Align the blue of day

    Heaven can wait spectacular
    Assign the way they change

    The weightless shape of language
    Divine tongue in cheek

    Complete in transformation
    They dissipate in heat

    Clouds engage the way we feel
    Like God they're so surreal

    Man, I hope God's feelin' me
    Cause WE ain't no big deal

    PEACE...



    Darryl Abdu Omari :shades:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte in white! that's different.

    nice piece..
     
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    What a soft and billowy description of one of God's beautiful creations, clouds. This was a lovely drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i can feel myself floating this was a perfect picture
    str8 grade A brutha 1poet
     
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    Thanks, for the hang time in your sky ~
     
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    Don't worry I'm sure he's feeling you
    The lines, rhyme and similie were all so very good!
     
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    Thank you, THA-EMISSARY,

    Blessings upon yo' house!
     
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