Black Poetry : clouded teardrops

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am thinking of you tonight
    as your whispers are carried on
    teardrops from a clouded sky to
    find rest in the dew soaked grass

    I look for you in the clouds hoping
    that the blue grey tint will form as
    an outline of you when the breeze
    grows stronger during the afternoon;

    I want to close my eyes and yet
    I know that one blink would
    erase the moment I saw you in
    the gentleness of the breeze;

    I am thinking of you tonight
    as I rest in the tall grass just to
    allow the teardrops from your
    face find rest in my embrace.
     
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    dnommo........what can I say, you leave my "heart" speechless

    seeing/feeling/once again knowing the "love" that is in absence
    but yet......is not..... as it exist within the beauty of the surroundings
    of nature.........quote: allow the teardrops from your
    face / find rest in my embrace.

    This was absolutely beautiful and truly felt!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mr. D
    this was the perfect embrace
    and the tears of warm drop
    to a beautifully pose'd piece
    u once again has took it to
    the level of true love and feelings

    man i love'd it to the fullest
     
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    dude...
    this was as visual as it gets
    this was phat man...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks people...juste wanted to drop a few in as i was passing through

    one
     
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    pass our way any day we look forward to u coming
    i know i do
     
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    and i shall try to pass through more often...

    one.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    passing through to repost for a friend who missed the first time
     
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    absolutely beautiful...
     
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    thank you poet...i am honored by your visit
     
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