Quiet Poetry Lounge : Cloud Song

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 7thPoet, Jul 9, 2004.

  1. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cloud Song

    I wished upon a cloud one day
    And asked its beauty
    what it would say
    If it had voice
    and song like me
    While floating high
    above so free
    What message
    would it sing to me
    If I could sing
    the cloud said proud
    I would not sing
    so very loud
    I’d whisper soft
    sweet melodies
    Like those you hear
    in wind swept trees
    My song would calm
    the restless soul
    And warm the hearts
    of those turned cold
    From where I rest
    above all things
    I’d sing of all
    that good cheer brings
    For as I gaze
    from my lofty view
    I see the miracle
    in each of you
    Because I see things
    from high above
    My song would be
    a song of love
    But since our Maker
    has not allowed
    Music to rain down
    from this cloud
    I trust in you
    my dear friend
    To sing my song
    and make it end
    On a high note
    sweet and clear
    Cause I feel your harmony
    way up here...
     
  2. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It makes me smile to be in your company. This was pretty, poet
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm...mmm....mmm...

    mm....mm


    have you ever tasted something so exquisite...you couldn't speak

    just give that mmm...

    close your eyes and allow the flavor to blossom in your mouth...

    this piece was just like that...

    A rose unfolding in my my mind and soul... :sand:

    Poet...your skill is off the richtor...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was calm and peaceful i like the vibe of this
    thanks for sharing.....
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yall be showin' a brother much love
    and i ain't turnin' none of it down
    i appreciate you... :luvv:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, what a beautiful concept. Very nice drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was well done and the depth it pose awesome 7th !
    flow head i see why ya da poet of the week !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so peaceful it simply made me smile and think, yea, a cloud would say something calm and soothing like that. Flow on poet.
     
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