Black Poetry : Cloud-shadows

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The night covers
    and thoughts
    of something
    pure and
    something haunting
    emerges.
    In the cloud-shadows,
    my soul is
    regenerated and eclipsed.
    I experience a bliss
    that leaves me
    transfixed on
    life's kiss.
    I'm worthy of this
    feeling,
    of this floating smoothly
    through the cloud-shadows.
    In the dark of
    the night,
    my rhapsody is heard on the air.
    Come away with me to a
    place where nightime stirs
    up magic and
    their are plenty of kisses
    to give and share.
    Experience my cloud-shadows.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/' Dior Robynsonne Inc.
    ~D.X. Robynsonne
     
  2. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whooooa... yeah mellow smooth flow, I enjoyed reading it.
    Pretty creative E.Allure, thanks for sharing
     
  3. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No problem pa. I appreciate the love.
     
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    love it :wink:
    smooooooooth work
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *E.Allure* thank you so much love. I appreciate all of your gorgeous compliments and you as a person. That is my spoken word!
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is hot...i liked it...
    :heart:
    -story
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanna go somewhere like that one day sounds fun!lol That was good had me there for a minute....
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my darling. God bless you
     
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