Black Poetry : Closure

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  1. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~For The One Who Is.....Still~

    Losing myself
    between his breaths I heard the memories
    pouring from his lips, and I sat paralyzed
    amazed by what his heart had held
    for so long

    his wounds still fresh, still deep.... and still
    I was the only one with the healing salve

    and so

    I waited for the downpour to cease
    waited with my arms outstretched
    my heart open; my mind free ...

    His acceptance/forgiveness
    LOVE
    freed all of me...

    I waited, ready to liberate us physically

    But when the rain did finally end
    we were both skin-soaked in
    what happened way back then

    He christened my soul,
    his forever~ sista~friend


    T
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To breathe the deep , relieving breath of closure is a beautiful thing. Feeling you.

    BE
     
  3. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you

    for your kind words...you encourage me.

    T
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FOREVERNESS

    DEEP WITHIN A CLOSER MOMENT OF TWO
    SEE SELF OF LOVE AS U BREATH IN
    VERY BEAUTIFUL WHEN U SEE BEYOND......:heart:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    time

    and love.....two main ingredients for healing.

    Peace


    a
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful...

    You always needs closure in some portions of your life and within that you find peace within... I enjoyed this....
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nycely written, i must say. keep on scribin'...i'm watchin'.
     
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    In closing,

    there are traces of love we inevitably leave behind, perhaps with forget-me-not messages for the other to find....

    Thank you for these expressions of a most memorable time.

    Ant
     
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