Black Poetry : closure

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Mar 3, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i had the urge
    to reach across the table
    and smack the butterscotch
    mocha skin of off his face....

    i swam in his eyes searching
    for the man that once held me
    in his arms and nibbled in my ear....

    he would put his fingers
    between my thighs and provokatively
    make me want more....

    who was this stranger
    before me? I wanted
    to sa-shay thru his mind,
    try to find something more
    human than what was before me...

    he breathed deeply...
    exhaled a jumble of
    "i just don't love u anymore"
    and
    "this is going nowhere"

    that stung...
    made me want to curl
    up into a ball and just
    stop breathing let TIME
    past by and forget me...

    instead i just sat there trying
    fathom life without my GOD,

    to be continued...

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well not dis was deep and well felt
    how it cross mental state of mind
    flow on pt.2 please
     
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    nice flow indeed
    pt2 cant wait...
    flow on my lil' sista
    :angel1:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love yall
    love,
    -story
     
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    wow sister..
    seeing the picture on the canvas
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    thanks for the love bluwater....
    -story
     
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