Black Poetry : Closure pt.2

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Looking from da fire
    i mourn the passing
    of the years ,years
    of significance one
    history ancient
    one whom stood
    proudly yet witness
    da face of faces
    word by word
    complete cross lines
    the moment in stilliness
    as i look into the fire
    a closure wave in
    bright orange redish yellow
    i see time past
    and the present also passing
    i stumble to the chambers
    of reasons and look
    seeing time that were important
    and where time has now lost
    it's importance
    at the lawn's edge a spike bush
    stoically perserveres abid da
    dark cold assault under siege
    numbness of terror in this
    aggression da blaze burn
    i know time is up as i leave
    da code of whispered message
    as reactivated call to arms
    crusade arrow tips in face
    of conflict no matter who is
    right or who is left
    yet protected by the shield
    brave in true chivalry
    the calling , beckoning pladge
    in da lexurious of reasons
    dat anoint thy soul in lilac
    perfumes it's known to never
    be if u seek into history of
    a closure .....pt.3 next!

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was on da mind thoughts lay
    and speak loud
    flow head on....Angel
     
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    CLOSURE is picture perfect!
     
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    I can see the brightness of the flickering from the flames and feel the intensity from within. Looking forward to part three.
     
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    thankz sistah Angel brutha 1poet & sistah watz
    your words means a lot
     
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