Black Poetry : Closeted Emotions

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  1. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish I could give back the thing I took
    The ability to see within
    To trust in the outcomes she once new
    Believing again in things authentic

    I never wanted to go to a place
    Where gods are silenced
    Little girls disgraced
    Justice convicted and displaced

    I wish I could take back individuality
    Knowing that hope was beyond chaos
    Deliverance part of the plan
    Making choice between me and three girls

    I never wanted my sisters unsafe
    To feel and know the fads embraced
    I wish I could be aware of occurrences laughed
    The ways they have grown the things they craft

    Nobody knows how cruel is hope
    When one learns forgiveness devastating
    How tragic it is when we just get to exist
    Beneath the blossoms of silver moon

    I a perfect undercover lover
    Regret the no I do not embrace
    The ways I disappear without a trace
    Can I get a witness of where this place

    I want to play jump rope
    Run in the rain
    Seek again once the accomplishments attained
    For little girl lost feels all in vain

    When limits adrift
    Every door a trap
    Can I walk into a city
    Never ever look back

    I wish my mother knew
    How much I love her still
    The things I regret against my will
    The things that scare me make me a stone

    Mommy you just do not know
    The places I go, how very alone
    I can’t find my playmates
    For they have never been

    Success becoming my only sin

    I wish you could help me
    Come back once again
    Show me how to fight
    Injustice within

    My moment is sadness
    I feel footprints about me
    In this instant invisible
    Trapped in silences

    Patrice C. Queen

    Trapped in silences
    In this instant invisible
    I feel footprints about me

    My moment is sadness

    Injustice within
    Show me how to fight
    Come back once again
    I wish you could help me

    Success becoming my only sin

    For they have never been
    I can’t find my playmates
    How very alone, the places I go
    Mommy you just do not know

    The things that scare me make me a stone
    The things I regret against my will
    How much I love her still
    I wish my mother knew

    Never ever look back
    Can I walk into a city
    Every door a trap
    When limits adrift

    For little girl lost feels all in vain
    Seek again once the accomplishments attained
    Run in the rain
    I want to play jump rope

    Can I get a witness of where this place
    The ways I disappear without a trace
    Regret the no I do not embrace
    I a perfect undercover lover

    Beneath the blossoms of silver moon
    How tragic it is when we just get to exist
    When one learns forgiveness devastating
    Nobody knows how cruel is hope

    The ways they have grown the things they craft
    I wish I could be aware of occurrences laughed
    To feel and know the fads embraced
    I never wanted my sisters unsafe

    Making choice between me and three girls
    Deliverance part of the plan
    Knowing that hope was beyond chaos
    I wish I could take back individuality

    Justice convicted and displaced
    Little girls disgraced
    Where gods are silenced
    I never wanted to go to a place

    Believing again in things authentic
    To trust in the outcomes she once new
    The ability to see within
    I wish I could give back the thing I took

    Closeted Emotions
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To forgive is divine, not for others...but for the sanity of Patrice C Queen. Misery adores company, and if intertained...will forever stay and enjoy the show.
    Allow the footprints in the sand, to take you where you want/need to go.
    Very heartfelt piece poet
     
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    PatriceCQueen this was deep... Nice work poet
     
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    Pain-Love-Beauty & Uprising that is Patrice C Queen
    Loving this My Beautiful Sister
     
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    Closeted Emotions...I know exactly wut u talkin bout and I feel ya...

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
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    deep emotions flowin i feel ya here sista .........
     
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    You've got a witness, I indeed understand. Looking back on my childhood I realize that I was in such a rush to grow up, the decisions I made and the consequences that resulted from them, lots of them still directly affect me to this day. But I am just trying to give those things to God for He knows everything about me. I definitely related to this and a do appreciate it.
     
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    YOU ARE ON MARK....I PUSHING FORWARD....THE ETERNAL REVERBERATED ECHO HAS STOPPED....I KNOW I M NEAR THE OTHERSIDE

    PEACE PATRICE
     
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    I WAITED FOR THE NEW YEAR TO RESPOND

    TY FOR THE LOVE

    :shock::shock::shock: HAPPY NEW YEARS :shock::shock::shock:

    PEACE

    PATRICE
     
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    I KNOW I MISBEHAVE WITH YOU

    THAKS FOR THE MADRESPECT

    PEACE

    PATRICE
     
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