Black Poetry : closer still

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  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as i look out my window
    your face mirrors mine
    and my tears begin to mix
    with the rain

    i ask the moonlight sleeping
    beside your bed to stir
    and hold you in its love
    until my arms can get there

    so full my heart with you
    the love spills endlessly
    nourishing every inch of me
    with the thought of living
    forever

    in your sweet embrace
     
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    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    beautiful. it's good to see you stretching out.
     
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    I can picture your view!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Awaken by sweet mist
    watching the rising moon
    aglow against my face
    da reflection image of you

    Tender tingles tappin wit shilvers
    love denounce in hello hush
    feeling a passionate bliss
    as i reach out wit arms

    I can hear ya heart beating
    in da indingo melodies
    as mines dance inside ya radiancy
    I whisper come closer as i await
    ya sweet embrace.
     
  5. TotalView

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    Thank you, beautiful poetic brother...just trying to use every tool I possess to express the depth of my love.

    (smile)
     
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    I'm so glad you can.

    (smile)
     
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    as the ocean waves slow dance with the mist
    and the mountains hush their windy peaks
    i ask the caves living between you & me
    to whistle a simple tune
    as I sing my heart to you

    ** " I'll give ya all myyyyy life
    and
    all my looooooove...
    if
    you
    Promise that you'll be here forever
    I'll give you all of meeeee
    I'll give you everything
    If you promise you'll never leave me"

    ** apologies to Keyshia Cole - You Complete Me
     
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    I'll alwayz be
    never leave thee
    for i am love.....
     
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    There's no me without you.
     
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