Black Poetry : closer still

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Nov 29, 2011.

  1. TotalView

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    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    beautiful. it's good to see you stretching out.
     
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    I can picture your view!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Awaken by sweet mist
    watching the rising moon
    aglow against my face
    da reflection image of you

    Tender tingles tappin wit shilvers
    love denounce in hello hush
    feeling a passionate bliss
    as i reach out wit arms

    I can hear ya heart beating
    in da indingo melodies
    as mines dance inside ya radiancy
    I whisper come closer as i await
    ya sweet embrace.
     
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    Thank you, beautiful poetic brother...just trying to use every tool I possess to express the depth of my love.

    (smile)
     
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    I'm so glad you can.

    (smile)
     
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    I'll alwayz be
    never leave thee
    for i am love.....
     
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    There's no me without you.
     
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